你寫得不錯, 我稍稍改了一下, 你看看。Dear Sir/Madam, Thank you for your precious time spent in reading this email. I am a Chinese self-study examination student majored in Business Administration. I am an Undergraduate student and I want to (這兒怎么斷了 ) With a plan for further education and study in this field，and great respect for your university，would you please help me to clarify the following questions1、 Does your university accept self-study examination student2、 If you can, what are the conditions and what should I prepare forThank you very much for your time and patience again. Sincerely, Albee Jiang