· 英文當(dāng)中文講

很多咱中國童鞋寫的郵件都是拿中文里的語氣直接翻譯過來的，寫在英文里就很奇怪。舉個(gè)例子：

I applie for the Summer Analyst position at your company's New York office an still haven’t gotten any notice from you. Your company has been my ream employer for years,so it woul be a pity if I in’t have a chance to interview with your company.

讀到這兒就樂了，立刻能腦補(bǔ)一個(gè)畫面：一個(gè)中國童鞋一臉虔誠的說“我真的特別喜歡你們公司，如果沒能跟你們公司面試真的是太遺憾了！”這話中文聽著多有誠意啊，但直接翻譯成英文就覺得超級(jí)無敵囧。如果你想表達(dá)相似的意思，不妨試試這么說：

I wante to follow-up with you because I have not yet hear back regaring my application status. Your company is my first choice,so I woul greatly appreciate the opportunity to interview with your team.

這樣說比較符合美國的書面郵件說法，而且顯得很淡定。下次記得用用看。

· 命令的語氣

很多同學(xué)在郵件里附上自己簡(jiǎn)歷之后會(huì)扔一句“Please review my resume”，感覺跟大老板扔了一沓兒材料在臉上似的。下次咱換個(gè)客氣一點(diǎn)的語氣好嗎？比如這樣：

I woul greatly appreciate any avice you have on refining my resume for opportunities in this fiel.

還經(jīng)?？吹接型@樣寫：

“I can’t thank you enough for your mentorship an guiance. Let’s stay in touch!”腦補(bǔ)的畫面就是被領(lǐng)導(dǎo)拍著肩說’年輕人以后跟哥混??！’換成這樣說是不是好很多：

Thanks again for your mentorship an guiance. I’ll be sure to keep you apprise of any evelopments on my en,an I look forwar to staying in touch.

【微語】破千重關(guān)心懷天下，讀萬卷書志在四方。