ACT官網(wǎng)上放出了一道作文樣題(Intelligent machines)和6篇不同分?jǐn)?shù)段的范文，官網(wǎng)滿分范文卻換成了一篇五段式結(jié)構(gòu)的文章。這篇滿分作文就language use下面附的評語是“precise vocabulary and a variety of clear sentence structures reflect advanced skill in the use of language”。對于語言表達(dá)欠佳的同學(xué)來說，這篇范文提供了一篇非常好的仿寫素材。

首先，我們結(jié)合一個倒裝句看看如何在文中體現(xiàn)“advanced skill in the use of language”:

Not only does the preference of the mechanical over the natural interfere with the job market and the economy,but its use also has the potential to seriously degrade our culture as a whole.(這個句子出現(xiàn)在滿分作文的conclusion中，對于正文第一段和第二段intelligent machines的兩個弊端進(jìn)行了總結(jié)，可見not only…but also的句型是一個非常切實好用的總結(jié)句)

這個句子使用的是部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，沒有倒裝之前的語序是The preference of the mechanical over the natural not only interferes with the job market and the economy,but its use also has the potential to seriously degrade our culture as a whole.

也就是說，當(dāng)not only放在句首時，not only所在的這部分需要進(jìn)行部分倒裝，也就是說將謂語的一部分如助動詞did/does/do或情態(tài)動詞倒裝至主語之前。(but also后無需倒裝)。下面我們舉個例子：

大學(xué)教育不僅標(biāo)志著成年期的起點，而且還為學(xué)生在未來迎接社會中的挑戰(zhàn)作準(zhǔn)備。

未倒裝的語序：University education not only marks the starting line of adulthood,but it also prepares students for future challenges in society.

那么如何將這個句子進(jìn)行倒裝呢?第一步：我們把not only放在句首;第二步：university education marks倒裝為does university education mark(一般現(xiàn)在時的話，助動詞do/does提前，一般過去時的話，did提前，后面動詞采用原形)，于是我們就有了下面這個句子：

Not only does university education mark the starting line of adulthood,but it also prepares students for future challenges in society.

下面我們結(jié)合更多的例句來進(jìn)行講解，各位同學(xué)可以先自己仿寫，然后再進(jìn)行核對。

1. 老師們不僅可以通過學(xué)習(xí)收獲新知識與更先進(jìn)的教學(xué)技巧，而且還有機(jī)會與同行們交流。

Not only could new knowledge and more advanced teaching skills be gained in class,teachers are also endowed with the opportunity to exchange thoughts with their counterparts.

2. 完善醫(yī)保不僅符合人民的根本利益，而且有助于增強(qiáng)一個國家的國力。

Not only does perfecting health care comply with the essential interests of people,but also helps strengthen the national power of the country.

3. 參加豐富多彩的體育運動不僅使身體收益，而且還能學(xué)到人生的道理。

As far as I am concerned,does participating in various sports benefit people physically,but also teaches people lessons about life.

4. 由于生活在當(dāng)今社會現(xiàn)實所給予的空前壓力之下，人們理當(dāng)為自己保留一段安靜的時刻。這不僅有利于保持工作與休息間的良性平衡，而且還能使其在精神上和生理上雙重收益。

Living under the unprecedented pressure from current social realities,one should reserve a quiet moment. Not only will it help one keep a good balance between work and rest,but also it can also further benefit him both spiritually and physically.

5. 盜版不僅給電影制片人造成了嚴(yán)重?fù)p失，而且從長遠(yuǎn)來看也損害了大眾的基本利益。

Not only does piracy cause heavy losses to movie producers,but also harms the basic interests of the masses in the long run.

當(dāng)然，這篇官方范文在語言上還有很多值得大家學(xué)習(xí)模仿的地方，希望大家多去對范文中的加分句型進(jìn)行分析仿寫，寫出自己的高分作文，預(yù)祝大家考試成功。