結(jié)構(gòu)：

提問+分析+觀點

舉兩個例子：

【例題1】

place for education:

perspective1: Schools are better places for education because institutions like schools are more likely to combine a myriad of resources for better use.

perspective2: Education does not necessarily take place in schools as long as the educated can be imparted with valuable things that might do favor for their future.

perspective3: Home schooling can also be an alternative for education because receiving education at home helps the educated to be free from unnecessary disturbance.

【開頭段Sample】Are schools the best place for children to receive education? Or are there any other alternatives available? When talking about places for education,the first thing that comes into our mind is classroom education. However,recently,more and more parents have chosen home schooling for their teenagers. parenting,surely,counts in education system; whereas,education can take various forms as long as the educated could be enlightened or inspired during the process.

【解析】開頭利用兩個問題“學(xué)校是否是接受教育的最佳場所”“有沒有其他選擇”引發(fā)讀者思考。緊接著利用該問題引發(fā)的深思進(jìn)一步分析有關(guān)受教育場所的問題。最后正式過渡到作者的立場，即perspective2：教育可以有不同的形式。

看完這個開頭，如果你覺得兩個提問還不過癮，沒關(guān)系，我們還有下面的高能版。

【例題2】

STEM education:

Many people believe that a background in STEM — science,technology,engineering and mathematics — is needed to succeed in the 21st century. As technological advancements continue to reshape society,people with STEM training are more likely to be in increasing demand as they apply for colleges or seek a job. However,students do not seem to share the enthusiasm for STEM education. Research suggests that their interest and participation in such fields are declining. Given that students are not interested in STEM,it is worthwhile to value STEM education.

perspective1: The purpose of education is to prepare students to get a good job. Highest-paying jobs require knowledge in STEM.

perspective2: It is much more than a high-paying job to be fulfilled in life. The happiest people work at what they love.

perspective3: No one can predict what a job in tomorrow will require. The basic,well-rounded education is best for most people.

【開頭段Sample】Do you remember the joy of solving a difficult equation on your own as a student? Do you remember the pleasure of listening to those greatest immortal souls in science? Do you remember the excitement when you finally discover how CpU works as an integrated part? These experiences keep reminding us how fun STEM education is. To students who have great interest in STEM,it would be an ideal gift if they continue to learn STEM.

【解析】開頭3個“Do you remember…?”將提問法和排比修辭相結(jié)合，語氣瞬間增強(qiáng)3倍。一句話簡短分析了理工教育的趣味后，引出了立場：對于喜歡理工科的學(xué)生來說，學(xué)習(xí)使它們快樂，即觀點2。提問數(shù)量控制在3個以內(nèi)為宜，既不會造成虎頭蛇尾的感覺，也不會耽擱太多時間，畢竟文章重點還是要放在中間段。