知道為什么你的雅思寫作遲遲無法提分嗎？？ 學習了那么多技巧，動用了無數(shù)華麗辭藻，仍然還是5.5？ 很有可能是因為 那些讓考官看了憤憤不已的開頭 恰好被你使用了！ 今天，帶你來看下考官最討厭的十種雅思寫作開頭分別是什么？

1、中式英語

用中式英文開頭，不僅會讓考官看不懂，還暴露了你的語言功底，語料積累匱乏，是雅思寫作中的大忌。比如： 寫作主題：The happiest moment in your life 案例：In our life,there are always some moments which make your heart flower opene angrily… 寫作主題：The population problem 案例：The population problem is a very big problem. For example,in the city centers of Shanghai,we can always see people mountain people sea there.

2、胡亂翻譯中國俗語

胡亂翻譯中國俗語會起反作用，畢竟考官對中國俗語并不“感冒”，使用不慎，更會引起考官反感。比如： 寫作主題：Is it goo to have a large family? 案例：I think it is goo to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons,many lucks”… 寫作主題：Do you think one’s character is greatly influence by his/her family? 案例：Chinese ol wors says very goo: Dragon born ragon,phoenix born phoenix,rat’s son can make hole…

3、敘事啰嗦

開篇要主題清晰，上來啰啰嗦嗦表達不清，考官自然認為你的觀點模糊，甚至不會表達。比如： 寫作主題：Shoul college stuents be allowe to get marrie? 案例：This topic is very interesting. I’m very intereste in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college stuent an I’m not marrie…… 寫作主題：Will moern technology,such as the Internet,ever replace the book or the writing wor as the sole source of information? 案例：Ok,this topic is a very goo topic. First,let me tell you a story: I have a frien,he likes go on the internet very much. Every ay,he uses internet to rea news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more an more important in our aily life.

4、偏離主題

文不對題自然會扣分，給考官留下的印象就是跑題，想想整體寫作分數(shù)還會高么？比如： 寫作主題：It is sai that nowaays one can‘t acquire the qualifications an quality essential to success through university eucation. To what extent o you agree or isagree with the statement?案例：I think to success,we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities,we must learn a lot of things,for example,English,music tools,an etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers,our friens an from books. All in all,we can learn from many places.

5、觀點不明朗

雅思大作文很重要的一點就是你的邏輯性和觀點，如果觀點都不明確，后面的舉例證明等都會缺乏說服力，自然分數(shù)也不會高。比如： 寫作主題：Shoul college stuents be allowe to get marrie? 案例：I think this topic is very har to say. Because I am still very little,only 17,an not marrie,so this topic is very ifficult for me……

6、語法錯誤不斷

涉及到雅思寫作評分標準中的語法多樣性和準確性，語法錯誤不斷自然會成為扣分點。比如： 寫作主題：If chilren behave baly,shoul their parents acceptresponsibility an also be punishe? 案例：about this problem,my think is if chilren behave baly,then parents arenot right. Because teach chil is parent’s responsibility.

7、意思重復

反復重復一個意思，讓考官會覺得你并沒有什么可以表達的，或者詞匯表達能力有限，自然也會扣分。比如： 寫作主題：Your opinion on DINK families 案例：My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a goo thing. An it is a ba thing. It brings no benefits to our society an it is even sometimes harmful to our society

8、觀點絕對化

考生在使用語言描述事物或者表達自己的觀點時，應盡可能避免語言過于絕對化，更應該注意該語言中非絕對化表達方式的學習，這樣才能盡顯文章內容的客觀性。比如：
寫作主題：The importance of confience 案例：In my opinion,confience is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the worl are full of confience. While those people who on’t have confience,they all have faile.

9、內容過分簡單

考官想給你打分都沒有內容，所以切記開頭不要只寫一兩句話。比如：
寫作主題：The importance of environmental protection 案例：This issue is surely very important,let’s talk about it!

10、用詞不當

用詞不當會暴露你的詞匯，而且評分標準中談到“在不同的語境中，使用正確的詞性；”所以在使用詞匯的時候，正確性也是非常重要的。比如：
寫作主題：Shoul college stuents be allowe to get marrie? 案例：I think college stuents shoul not be allowe to get marrie because they are very young an so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

小建議

1.開頭切記不要用中式英語表達，多積累地道的英語表達。2.表達的觀點要客觀明確，切勿模棱兩可絕對化。3.內容要清晰明了，切勿反復啰嗦，也不能一句話代之。4.注意詞性使用，減少語法錯誤，不要生搬硬套“華麗辭藻”。

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