知道為什么你的雅思寫作遲遲無(wú)法提分嗎？？ 學(xué)習(xí)了那么多技巧，動(dòng)用了無(wú)數(shù)華麗辭藻，仍然還是5.5？ 很有可能是因?yàn)?那些讓考官看了憤憤不已的開(kāi)頭 恰好被你使用了！ 今天，帶你來(lái)看下考官最討厭的十種雅思寫作開(kāi)頭分別是什么？

1、中式英語(yǔ)

用中式英文開(kāi)頭，不僅會(huì)讓考官看不懂，還暴露了你的語(yǔ)言功底，語(yǔ)料積累匱乏，是雅思寫作中的大忌。比如： 寫作主題：The happiest moment in your life 案例：In our life,there are always some moments which make your heart flower opene angrily… 寫作主題：The population problem 案例：The population problem is a very big problem. For example,in the city centers of Shanghai,we can always see people mountain people sea there.

2、胡亂翻譯中國(guó)俗語(yǔ)

胡亂翻譯中國(guó)俗語(yǔ)會(huì)起反作用，畢竟考官對(duì)中國(guó)俗語(yǔ)并不“感冒”，使用不慎，更會(huì)引起考官反感。比如： 寫作主題：Is it goo to have a large family? 案例：I think it is goo to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons,many lucks”… 寫作主題：Do you think one’s character is greatly influence by his/her family? 案例：Chinese ol wors says very goo: Dragon born ragon,phoenix born phoenix,rat’s son can make hole…

3、敘事啰嗦

開(kāi)篇要主題清晰，上來(lái)啰啰嗦嗦表達(dá)不清，考官自然認(rèn)為你的觀點(diǎn)模糊，甚至不會(huì)表達(dá)。比如： 寫作主題：Shoul college stuents be allowe to get marrie? 案例：This topic is very interesting. I’m very intereste in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college stuent an I’m not marrie…… 寫作主題：Will moern technology,such as the Internet,ever replace the book or the writing wor as the sole source of information? 案例：Ok,this topic is a very goo topic. First,let me tell you a story: I have a frien,he likes go on the internet very much. Every ay,he uses internet to rea news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more an more important in our aily life.

4、偏離主題

文不對(duì)題自然會(huì)扣分，給考官留下的印象就是跑題，想想整體寫作分?jǐn)?shù)還會(huì)高么？比如： 寫作主題：It is sai that nowaays one can‘t acquire the qualifications an quality essential to success through university eucation. To what extent o you agree or isagree with the statement?案例：I think to success,we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities,we must learn a lot of things,for example,English,music tools,an etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers,our friens an from books. All in all,we can learn from many places.

5、觀點(diǎn)不明朗

雅思大作文很重要的一點(diǎn)就是你的邏輯性和觀點(diǎn)，如果觀點(diǎn)都不明確，后面的舉例證明等都會(huì)缺乏說(shuō)服力，自然分?jǐn)?shù)也不會(huì)高。比如： 寫作主題：Shoul college stuents be allowe to get marrie? 案例：I think this topic is very har to say. Because I am still very little,only 17,an not marrie,so this topic is very ifficult for me……

6、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤不斷

涉及到雅思寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的語(yǔ)法多樣性和準(zhǔn)確性，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤不斷自然會(huì)成為扣分點(diǎn)。比如： 寫作主題：If chilren behave baly,shoul their parents acceptresponsibility an also be punishe? 案例：about this problem,my think is if chilren behave baly,then parents arenot right. Because teach chil is parent’s responsibility.

7、意思重復(fù)

反復(fù)重復(fù)一個(gè)意思，讓考官會(huì)覺(jué)得你并沒(méi)有什么可以表達(dá)的，或者詞匯表達(dá)能力有限，自然也會(huì)扣分。比如： 寫作主題：Your opinion on DINK families 案例：My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a goo thing. An it is a ba thing. It brings no benefits to our society an it is even sometimes harmful to our society

8、觀點(diǎn)絕對(duì)化

考生在使用語(yǔ)言描述事物或者表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，應(yīng)盡可能避免語(yǔ)言過(guò)于絕對(duì)化，更應(yīng)該注意該語(yǔ)言中非絕對(duì)化表達(dá)方式的學(xué)習(xí)，這樣才能盡顯文章內(nèi)容的客觀性。比如：
寫作主題：The importance of confience 案例：In my opinion,confience is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the worl are full of confience. While those people who on’t have confience,they all have faile.

9、內(nèi)容過(guò)分簡(jiǎn)單

考官想給你打分都沒(méi)有內(nèi)容，所以切記開(kāi)頭不要只寫一兩句話。比如：
寫作主題：The importance of environmental protection 案例：This issue is surely very important,let’s talk about it!

10、用詞不當(dāng)

用詞不當(dāng)會(huì)暴露你的詞匯，而且評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中談到“在不同的語(yǔ)境中，使用正確的詞性；”所以在使用詞匯的時(shí)候，正確性也是非常重要的。比如：
寫作主題：Shoul college stuents be allowe to get marrie? 案例：I think college stuents shoul not be allowe to get marrie because they are very young an so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

小建議

1.開(kāi)頭切記不要用中式英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，多積累地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)。2.表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)要客觀明確，切勿模棱兩可絕對(duì)化。3.內(nèi)容要清晰明了，切勿反復(fù)啰嗦，也不能一句話代之。4.注意詞性使用，減少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要生搬硬套“華麗辭藻”。

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