PS 大神教我們?nèi)绾蝸韺懸黄晒Φ腜S，這是由UCAS (UCAS 是 Universities an Colleges Amissions Service 的縮寫，即“大學(xué)和學(xué)院招生服務(wù)中心”，它是一個(gè)公共服務(wù)機(jī)構(gòu)，統(tǒng)一為英國(guó)所有大學(xué)提供招生服務(wù)，和其他國(guó)家不同，申請(qǐng)英國(guó)大學(xué)的本科學(xué)位課程，都要通過UCAS進(jìn)行申請(qǐng)）的主任Cathy Gilbert分享的。

1. Remember how important the personal statement is to your application. This is a chance to show the universities why they shoul offer you a place,an it may be the only written work they see before making a ecision.

PS是除了學(xué)術(shù)預(yù)估成績(jī)之外，在錄取過程中另一個(gè)非常重要的參考因素。可能是唯一可以展現(xiàn)你的個(gè)人特點(diǎn)和潛力的機(jī)會(huì)，在熱門課程或者競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈的課程錄取中起到了至關(guān)重要的作用！

1. Be sure to get your grammar an punctuation right. These mistakes will be obvious to higher eucation staff. It’s quite acceptable to ask people you trust to rea the statement through.

PS的語(yǔ)法正確很重要啊，如果一篇PS里面低級(jí)語(yǔ)法都錯(cuò)很多，那你的雅思即使夠要求也會(huì)讓老師懷疑對(duì)不對(duì)！

1. Before you start writing,check the Entry Profiles for the courses you’re intereste in on Course Search at ucas.com. Universities set out the qualifications an experience they are looking for here.

寫之前先去看你感興趣的課程資料，然后就可以著重寫你哪些經(jīng)歷符合這門課程了。

1. You can enter up to 4,000 characters (incluing spaces) an 47 lines of text (incluing blank lines) – but there is no nee to use all the space. I woul recommen writing the statement offline then pasting the finishe text into Apply.

因?yàn)樘峤?PS時(shí)有時(shí)間限制，你不可能一口氣打完嘛。所以離線先修改到完美的版本，然后進(jìn)入U(xiǎn)CAS時(shí)再黏貼，注意不超過4000個(gè)字符（包含空格）和47行（包括空行），在wor的字?jǐn)?shù)統(tǒng)計(jì)里面可以檢查好。不要將過多篇幅集中在課程上，而要突出作為申請(qǐng)者的你。順便提醒，文章中避免出現(xiàn)斜體，黑體和下劃線以及其他非英語(yǔ)字符。

1. Think about why you are applying for the courses you have chosen – universities want to see strong evience that you know what’s require an that you’re enthusiastic about the subject. Rea our Ucas Avisers’ blog to see what the ecision-makers are looking for.

想想為什么你要申請(qǐng)這門課程，大學(xué)想看強(qiáng)有力的證據(jù)。就是你不能夸夸其談的講我就是喜歡我就是感興趣我以后要當(dāng) xx家。

舉個(gè)例子： ‘I like sports an I am a great fan of basketball.’‘Basketball matches require goo team working,everyboy all the players nee to trust their team-mate an a team also nees a leaer who can irect an inspire the whole team.’‘Everyone shares the success an I think playing basketball has taught me a lot about leaership,co-operation an goo effective communication.’

1. Ucas’s personal statement worksheet,esigne to help you think about what to inclue,has been ownloae 96,000 times this year.

(利用UCAS官網(wǎng)的 PS worksheet 引導(dǎo)你得出寫PS的想法)

1. Remember there’s just one personal statement,whether you make one or five choices. If you are applying for ifferent subjects or courses,try to pick out common themes an skills,such as writing ability or problem solving skills.

無論申請(qǐng)多少個(gè)專業(yè)都只有 1份PS！所以你要是申請(qǐng)不同專業(yè)的話就不要隨便把其中一個(gè)專業(yè)的名字寫在PS里面了，這樣老師會(huì)覺得你只想讀這一個(gè)專業(yè)，比如幾個(gè)專業(yè)都是工程類的就往大方向有共同點(diǎn)的地方去寫。

1. Write about jobs,work experience or work placements that are relevant to the courses you are applying for. If you are a mature stuent,it’s likely that you’ll have significant experience in the workplace to put forwar.

多寫寫和你申請(qǐng)的課程有關(guān)的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)和實(shí)習(xí)的東西，這個(gè)中國(guó)學(xué)生可能很少有這樣的機(jī)會(huì)，所以可以關(guān)注其他方面

作為國(guó)際學(xué)生，PS中還可以說明為什么赴英求學(xué)，同時(shí)盡量回答以下問題：

1) 你如何證明你可以在英文授課的環(huán)境下能順利完成高等教育

2) 你是否曾參與過英文授課的課程/考試？

3) 除學(xué)習(xí)之外，你是否參與過其它需要用到英文的活動(dòng)？

1. Remember that the statement shoul be all your own work,an not plagiarise. The Copycatch system checks each statement against a vast library to fin similarities. It simply isn’t worth trying to copy your statement,an very few applicants i this last year.

不能抄襲這是肯定的，因?yàn)?UCAS的檢測(cè)系統(tǒng)會(huì)把你的PS和以前提交過的PS相比較，所以你找以前寫得多棒的PS當(dāng)模板都沒用。

上傳的 PS會(huì)經(jīng)過UCAS相似度系統(tǒng)的測(cè)試：

歷年來申請(qǐng)者在UCAS系統(tǒng)上提交過的PS

網(wǎng)站上所有可搜索到的PS模板

其它途徑（例如：報(bào)紙雜志等）

如果你的 PS有抄襲嫌疑,首先會(huì)由專人小組鑒定超過10%相似度的PS是否被確認(rèn)抄襲；然后申請(qǐng)人和大學(xué)會(huì)同時(shí)收到抄襲確認(rèn)信函；最后Amission Tutor最后決定是否拒絕該學(xué)生申請(qǐng)。

1. Use soli examples that show your abilities an experiences,rather than vague statements such as “I have always reamt of becoming…” If you’re stuck on the introuction,UCAStv has a vieo looking at the best way to start your statement.

和第五點(diǎn)類似，一定要用例子說明，不要夸夸其談：我夢(mèng)想成為 xxx 這樣的句子。

舉個(gè)例子： ‘I spent two weeks working at a epartment store. I enjoying speaking to customers an helping them.’‘I spent two weeks managing customer enquiries at a epartment store. I learn how to interact with customer an hanle complaints. The experience highlighte the importance of positive communication between a business an its customer,an taught me how to manage ifficult enquires effectively.’

誰(shuí)會(huì)閱讀 PS評(píng)估你的大學(xué)申請(qǐng)？

1) 想要了解如何寫好一篇PS，首先要了解如何閱讀它：

2) 申請(qǐng)者的學(xué)習(xí)能力：通過之前的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷或?qū)I(yè)說明學(xué)生是一個(gè)合格的申請(qǐng)者。

3)申請(qǐng)?jiān)搶I(yè)的原因：從興趣入手，說明申請(qǐng)動(dòng)機(jī)并反映申請(qǐng)者的個(gè)性與才智。專業(yè)方向一致性＋個(gè)人愛好及特點(diǎn)對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)，研究有幫助。

4) 畢業(yè)后的職業(yè)計(jì)劃or學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃：表明學(xué)生目標(biāo)明確。短期學(xué)習(xí)目的／目標(biāo)＋長(zhǎng)期事業(yè)目標(biāo)。

5) 職責(zé)是“錄取最適合該專業(yè)的學(xué)生”

6)他們會(huì)收到成百上千份大學(xué)申請(qǐng),你的PS如何不被埋沒，甚至脫穎而出。

從哪里開始著手呢？

先嘗試回答如下問題： 1)你打算申請(qǐng)什么專業(yè)？為什么要申請(qǐng)這個(gè)專業(yè)？2)? 你如何表現(xiàn)出自己有能力完成所申請(qǐng)的課程？3) 是否參與過課外活動(dòng)/工作實(shí)習(xí)，從中有哪些收獲？4)? 你課余時(shí)間都有哪些愛好？從中收獲了什么？它們對(duì)你的大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)有幫助么？5)?? 你對(duì)畢業(yè)后有什么規(guī)劃？

PS的整體結(jié)構(gòu)

A.自傳式（時(shí)間順序）

B.敘事式（事情發(fā)展順序／邏輯順序）

C.專業(yè)式（邏輯順序）

各部分參考比重： 60% Course an how you’re suite to it；30% work experience/skills that are relevant to your subject；10% Interest an hobbies。